Well, that dream sequence I was talking about yesterday... I cut it out. It really didn't flow well, and I didn't like how I was forcing it out. It's gone. It has been condensed down to a paragraph. The dreams were too abstract in relation to what they represented, I don't know if anyone else would have any idea what they meant. I sent the first chapter to my English professor. Now, I'm waiting on pins and needles to see what she has to say about it. I want feedback badly, positive and negative.
Today, for a certain other character within this story, I looked up automatons. Very creepy sometimes. They look like Howedy Doody (I find him creepy as hell). One that I thought was particularly interesting was the doll that drew four different pictures on a glass tablet. I want one, seriously. I would burn it out though since I'd probably show everyone and watch it about a thousand times myself. Anyone else love this?
PS- Is it pathetic to look forward to eating a CLT sandwich? (cheese=c)
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